Today P4/5 have been learning how to make fantastic sentences.
Click the 'comments' section to see how the boys and girls improved the sentence below -
The dog ate his dinner.
After this the class were challenged to beat Roald Dahl at writing. We took an extract from 'George's Marvellous Medicine' and erased some of the words. The pupils had to think of new words to replace them with.
17 comments:
The hungry small dog ate his meaty dinner.
By Isabelle
The small fluffy dog ate his enormous dinner.
By Emily.
The ugly weird good dog ate its smelly dinner.
From Shurnjeet P4
The big ugly dog ate his rotten dinner.
By Jack
The weird small dog ate his enormous dinner.
By Kai Watson
The ugly dog ate his bad smelly dinner.
By Benjamin
The tiny dog ate his fantastic enormous dinner.
Daniel
The big ugly dog ate his small dinner.
By honour
The mother dog ate it's yummy warm dinner. By Amanda watt
The slimy stinky dog ate his marvelous dinner.
By Ben Wilson
The miniature dog ate his horrible meaty dinner.
By Sophie Jewell.
The cool dog ate his yummy marvelous dinner.
By lewis
The huge silly dog ate his enormous dinner.
Hannah Burgess
The small ugly dog ate a fantastic dinner.
By Daniil
The evil fat dog ate his big dinner.
By steven
Brilliant sentences
well done P4/5
Phyllis
Interesting dogs you lot have!
Great work
Graham - Steven's Dad
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